One of the interesting things I found about Faulkner’s writings is his overuse of a particular phrase or idea. In “Barn Burning”, there were several of these instances. For example, in the first paragraph there is a long description of the cheese: “The boy… knew he smelled cheese…- this, the cheese which he knew he smelled…” (p.161) Then, towards the end of this short story there is another reference to the cheese: “he watched his father emerge from the store and produce from a paper sack a segment of cheese.” (p.172) Another phrase he used several times was “without heat.” On page 163, he talks about this in reference to the mules. “His father mounted to the seat where the older brother already sat and struck the gaunt mules with two savage blows with the peeled will, but without heat.” This phrase is used again a few pages later: “His father struck him with the flat of his hand on the side of the head, hard but without heat.” (p. 164). A few lines later, it was used again. “…any stick in order to kill a horse fly, his voice still without heat or anger.” I think the overuse of this particular phrase shows Abner Snopes character. Abner Snopes is controlling and feels superior to many other characters in the story. I think this phrase shows that Abner doesn’t do things to be mean. I think it’s his demand for respect. (Just to follow up on this remark, in Faulkner’s other short story, “An Odor of Verbena”, I noticed he used the 3 years Bayard had been in college as a steady time frame.)
The beginning of this short story was a little confusing. He mentions a young boy in a courtroom and there is a long reference to cheese. I thought to myself, what do the two have to do with each other? To me, that was a weird correlation. After reading the entire piece, I realized the underlying meaning to this long, wordy passage. (It is a reference to the social status of the family.)
Sarty faces a few dilemmas in this short story. His big dilemma in this story is his loyalty to his family vs. his loyalty to moral justice and all that is right. I think Faulkner puts a lot of emphasis on this point. I think it’s a valid point because it made me think of what I would have done in his position. The ways of your family is one of the first things you learn. Whether what your family is doing is right or wrong, the morals created by them are embedded in your head. As you encounter other people and other aspects of society, you come to realize that other people have other values and morals, some which may be different than yours. A younger Sarty may have seen his father as a hero or invincible. But as he grew up and began to develop his own ideas, he begins to realize that his father may not be right. This is a strong dilemma. Think about turning against your family. It’s hard to imagine. Another dilemma Sarty faces may seem less important. Abner Snopes was charged 20 bushels for his barn burning. Sarty knows that his father’s burning was wrong, but on the other hand, he believed that the 20 bushels was an excessive punishment. Here he is looking for middle ground.
Faulkner's writings make you reflect on your own life. What would you do in each character's position? Would you get the same outcome?